One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -apologise for missing the birthday celebration -explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend -say what you would like to do to show you are sorry

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Dear Smith, I am extremely sorry from bottom of my heart. I know

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apologise can`t replace the joy of the

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missed. And you know how

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apply

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important

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event was to me. Unfortunately, due to some unexpected technical issue which happened during the deployment of our project finalization. Which led me and my whole team to sort out the problem. Apart from

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its

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was our final day of the project deadline so it has to be done by end of the day

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any how

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, after diligent ,effort the glitch got resolved by midnight.

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, by the time I realized that

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missed informing you it was quite late. Admittedly, I know

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letter is not enough to feel sorry.

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, please allow me to give you a treat, so we can go out for a lunch together at our favourite Chinese restaurant along with an evening movie. I hope you will consider

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as my apologies. Yours loving

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Kind Regards

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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