Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The world is becoming more and more modern but some people still think that
children
should not be forced to learn a foreign
language
. I entirely disagree with
this
view. There are some reasons why
children
should learn a foreign
language
.
Firstly
, many companies
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now required a degree
of
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English or Chinese or Japanese and so on. So if
children
do not learn a foreign
language
, they may have trouble in the future.
Secondly
, our country is visited by many foreigners.
Therefore
,
children
should learn a foreign
language
such
as English or Chinese to understand what the visitors say when they ask them something. Learning a foreign
language
brings many benefits
for
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children
.
First
of all, if
children
have learnt a foreign
language
since they were at school, they can find a job easily when they grow up.
Moreover
,
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children
who want to study abroad, it is a great idea to learn
foreign
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language
.
Last
but not least, if
children
know a foreign
language
, they can communicate with foreign visitors and get more information as well as knowledge about other countries
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the world. In conclusion, learning a foreign
language
is very important for
children
and I do not agree with the viewpoint that schools had not better force
children
to learn the
language
of another country.
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