Some people think that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily, Do you agree or disagree? What other methods could be used to reduce air traffic?

The problem with the government increasing
taxes
to reduce
air
traffic
is debatable.
This
essay will discuss why the government should increase
taxes
to
minimise
air
traffic
and
also
suggest different channels that can be implemented to
minimise
such
.
Air
traffic
has long been a problem for the environment itself and that’s why the
state
should take strict measures to lessen it. All flying objects
such
as
planes
, jets and several more, release toxic gases into the
air
thus
polluting the
air
that both humans and animals rely on for breathing. A recent study from Fulnick University drew the attention of the government stating that in the
next
fifteen years if
air
traffic
has not been controlled around twenty-five per cent of different species of birds would eventually become extinct. With that being said, different measures
such
as increasing
taxes
should be taken into consideration to reduce
such
atrocities and cleanse the
air
.
In addition
to increasing
taxes
, another method that the
state
should implement to
minimise
air
traffic
is setting limits on the number of
planes
that can fly in the
air
at a given period. For most people who choose to fly with their private
planes
, setting limits
such
as how often they can fly these
planes
will certainly have a positive impact on
air
traffic
because most wealthy people, choose to travel around in their private jets for safety and time reasons rather than board a flight with unknown passengers and avoid delays;
however
, if thirty people were invited to attend a ceremony in a foreign land and all decided to use their private jet at the same time to get to the destination
this
would cause heavy
traffic
in the
air
. In conclusion,
this
essay discussed why it is important for the
state
to push the agenda of
heavily
Change the word
heavy
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taxing
Change the form of the verb
taxed
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as a means to
minimise
air
traffic
and
also
suggested that the
state
sets limits on how many
planes
can fly at a given period.
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