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These days huge portions of population are moving from rural areas to urban areas. Do you think it is a positive or a negative trend?

#portions #population #areas #trend
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SELF-CONNECTION So how can we, Nguyen Trai students do something to save the
environment
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? Well, we can volunteer in cleaning groups in different places.
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, More than 700 volunteers attended the "World Cleanup Day 2022" event. To raise community awareness and call on the community to act together for the green
environment
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 of the Capital, World Cleanup Day was held. The total volume of garbage collected at Pham Hung road is 1,846kg (more than 1.8 tons). It is a simple but meaningful thing that we can do to contribute to making the scenery of our city more beautiful and saving the
environment
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. Another thing that we can do is propagate. You can do a simple thing of telling your family members, and your classmates to save the
environment
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 by doing practical things. You can work as a collaborator for student newspapers
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 as Hoa Hoc Tro,... to propagate to more people about environmental protection.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • migration
  • urbanization
  • positive trend
  • negative trend
  • economic opportunities
  • infrastructure
  • services
  • standard of living
  • overcrowding
  • strained resources
  • pollution
  • environmental problems
  • rural livelihoods
  • culture
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