many manufactured food and drink products contain high level off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree
It is believed that produced food and drink which contain high
carbohidrate
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carbohydrate
carbohydrates
level
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levels
affect
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effect
on
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apply
humans
health.Since they cause many diseases Change the noun form
human
such
as heart problems,Correct word choice
and diabetics
diabetics
,the government should increase the cost of sugar Replace the word
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products
that will make them accessible and force population
to intake less Add an article
the population
a population
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.In my opinion , reducing environmental health issues by making Correct your spelling
carbohydrate
carbohydrates
prices
higher is a good Correct your spelling
decision
desicion
.
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decision
mainly
caused by the difference Add a missing verb
is mainly
of
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in
prices
between healthy and harmful food,but ministries
intervention Change noun form
ministries'
ministry's
on
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in
prices
in this
field could change the situation totally.Firstly
,more expensive sugary products
will encourage people
to consume less of it
.Making junky food less accessible by changing the price ,force Correct pronoun usage
them
people
to buy other ,more healthy production
.Replace the word
products
For example
,when individuals have choice
between Add an article
a choice
the choice
hamburger
with Correct article usage
a hamburger
high
level of sugar and Add an article
a high
the high
a
2 portions of Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
great
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the great
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the Replace the word
choose
second
option.
The healthy
issues caused by intaking harmful snacks Replace the word
health
also
may reduce by increasing the prices
of sugary products
.The lack of Correct your spelling
choice
choise
among unhealthy Correct your spelling
choice
production
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products
lead
individuals to become Change the verb form
leads
more
healthier by changing their diets.Change the word
apply
For instance
,when people
's diet
include only beneficial Fix the agreement mistake
diets
products
for an organism,people
can't have health problems such
as obesity.Making these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
products
less desirable helps to improve the quality of life for almost every people
.
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person
a
lot of diseases and changing the cost for them can encourage Change preposition
in a
people
to consume less junky eats.Moreover
, it force
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forces
people
to lead healthier
lifestyle.Generally ,it is one of the best options to improve society's well-being.Add an article
a healthier
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