Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: • how you know about this city/town • what information was incorrect • what the editor should do about this.

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the information you updated in an article about the town. I have been living in

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town for about two years. I came here for study purposes and I am very delighted to get excellent services from the local council. There is some information in an article I am totally disagreed with.

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, the transportation issue is that buses are not running on time but it is not true.Transits are working smoothly and there is no problem with scheduling.

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, it has been mentioned that parks and local community centres are not well organized which is wrong. All the community centres are organized and meetings are held once a week to plan how to improve them more.

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, I just want to request you to update and correct the information in your

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article so that people get to know how

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city is well maintained. Thank you for your understanding. Yours faithfully.

MANPREET130KAURThu Nov 17 2022

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