A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He or she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. write a letter to your friend. In your letter give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply

Dear Sam, I have
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received
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received
your letter and have got a little surprised that you
you
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would like to
enroll
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for
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the strength of material
course
. Don't get me wrong, I am
enphusiastic
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enthusiastic
about your change of mind. As you know, In the
last
semester, I
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got
this
course
by
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professor Asadi which was influential
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I consider
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my
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path. He had
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reached
touched
teached
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us so well that I got
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A
at
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the final exam. The
source book
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in his class was written by J. Adams who is the pioneer in
this
major. If you ask me, apply to Harward University and take
this
course
with Professor Asadi. He will teach
paciently
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patiently
and you can ask him any
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, even basic ones, he will answer them completely. The opening period of registration for
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are
on
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July. So register from Harward University's website. Every step of registration
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written in
details
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and you would not encounter
to
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any
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problem
probelm
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problems
. I hope
this
letter will help you
applying
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for
this
course
. Don't hesitate to call me
for
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any
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or advice. Best wishes, Tom
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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