some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided Discuss both views and your own opinion?

There are many big question marks according to how
parents
can deal with their
children
specifically
teenagers
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parents
and
teenagers
is
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due to many factors
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as
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in their hormones, different insights, and living experiences. So, it is not strange to occur
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misunderstanding
misunderstandings
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between two generations. A mature person better knows how
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to a problematic situation according to experiences that he has gained and
also
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teenagers
be
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able
abale
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able
to provide a good solution. With a combination of these two
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it is possible to understand
teenagers
feeling and be
more calm
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about conflicts. In another view, some
parents
are thinking
this
conflict can hurt something and have an unwanted impact on their
children
and their future.
This
group count only on their experiences and
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not want to accept any other alternatives. They think it is impossible that
teenagers
can find a more reliable path to achieve a goal. There is
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idiom about
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people say "I am so sorry that the world has been changed but people have not". In my opinion, the responsible of
children
and
teenagers
growing up is
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system.
Parents
do not know what
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is well-suited for their
children
always and it is a truth. Everyone has some issues that can deliver to the
next
generation and just an educational system can avoid
this
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for the future if
teenagers
should be done their own ideas because everyone knows about
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talents and abilities. In conclusion, we never can choose an approach. We have to respect
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different types of views and have to find a solution to deal with them because there are many manners to reach
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goals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomy
  • individuality
  • emotional intelligence
  • conflict resolution skills
  • persistent
  • unresolved
  • communication gaps
  • rebellious behavior
  • substance abuse
  • mental health issues
  • critical skills
  • deeper understanding
  • family dynamics
  • quest for independence
  • crucial for adulthood
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