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some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided Discuss both views and your own opinion?

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There are many big question marks according to how
parents
 can deal with their
children
 specifically
teenagers
. Referring to several approaches and different kinds of views, specialists and psychologists have a variety of thises that work depending on personal mindset. Some ideas believe that conflict between
parents
 and
teenagers
 is
usual
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 due to many factors
such
 as
changing
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 in their hormones, different insights, and living experiences. So, it is not strange to occur
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misunderstanding
misunderstandings
misundrestanding
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 between two generations. A mature person better knows how
face
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 to a problematic situation according to experiences that he has gained and
also
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teenagers
 be
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able
abale
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able
 to provide a good solution. With a combination of these two
views
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 it is possible to understand
teenagers
 feeling and be
more calm
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 about conflicts. In another view, some
parents
 are thinking
this
 conflict can hurt something and have an unwanted impact on their
children
 and their future.
This
 group count only on their experiences and
do
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 not want to accept any other alternatives. They think it is impossible that
teenagers
 can find a more reliable path to achieve a goal. There is
a
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 idiom about
this
 people say "I am so sorry that the world has been changed but people have not". In my opinion, the responsible of
children
 and
teenagers
 growing up is
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 system.
Parents
 do not know what
it
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is well-suited for their
children
 always and it is a truth. Everyone has some issues that can deliver to the
next
 generation and just an educational system can avoid
this
. Thinking and
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the decision
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decision
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 for the future if
teenagers
 should be done their own ideas because everyone knows about
own
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 talents and abilities. In conclusion, we never can choose an approach. We have to respect
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different types of views and have to find a solution to deal with them because there are many manners to reach
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goals.
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