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Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #earth #activity #place
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human arrival on earth,
people
 have made many changes in their environment in order to live a good life.
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 some believe that human activities make the world a better habitat,
others
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while others
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 say that the earth has been damaged by
people
. From my point of view, I feel that We
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 are causing
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huge harm to the globe. On the one hand, it is undeniable that today's developed world is the result of the efforts of humans from generation to generation.
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 we would have lived in the cave and eaten the raw foods.Now we have advanced machines and our life seems more comfortable than before.Many important inventions have been made over these years namely
computer
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,electricity,fast cars,
airplanes
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 etc which has made the whole globe smaller and to our reach. Time and distance
has
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 been reduced by the human struggle and the knowledge we have acquired
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years
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.These were some barriers
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 our life that we have broken in past years.
On the other hand
, in rural
areas
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 new industries and cities are being built by
people
 to live a modern lifestyle which leads to a problem named deforestation.
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, urbanization created many deserts.
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people
 use unfit vehicles to travel.Those industries and vehicles
emits
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 a large amount of carbon dioxide which is known as
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greenhouse gas.Due to deforestation these gasses could not be absorbed by the trees and
ends
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 up damaging the earth's one of
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most important surface
layer
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layers
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,
Ozone
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 layer.Because of
that
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the
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dangerous ultraviolet ray enters the globe very easily which can be a great threat to our mankind.
Thus
, one or two of the basic activities can lead to a great problem. In conclusion, even though human beings struggle to make the world a better place for survival, some claim that it harms natural resources and I totally agree with them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • renewable resources
  • carbon footprint
  • conservation
  • ecology
  • emissions
  • fossil fuels
  • greenhouse gases
  • habitat destruction
  • industrialization
  • pollutants
  • recycling
  • urbanization
  • deforestation
  • ecosystem
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