With the rapid advancement of communication technology: smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is no doubt that

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innovation in technology especially communication

devices

offers chances for

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to have a convenient life.

Nonetheless

, some individuals oppose

this

due to unwanted consequences to

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society. From my point of view, the benefits would overshadow the drawbacks on account of some reasons as follow. To commence with, the negative sides of technological

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development would be a contentious issue.

Firstly

, it is apparent that making use of

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smartphones

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smart phones

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or tablets with high frequency would be detrimental to citizens’ health. According to WHO, mobile radiation wave has some repercussions on neuronal electrical activity

in particular

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alpha wave disruption, which deteriorates cognitive function, sleep, and various brain diseases including brain

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are documented.

Secondly

, the personal information of mobile users would be unsecured when they upload it to their

cellphones

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.

That is

justified by a recent survey by MIT university that approximately 55

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of

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on the Internet

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the outcome of using unauthorized apps.

On the other hand

, the advantages of communication technology would be indisputable. Admittedly, without the invention of smartphones, inhabitants are incapable of transmitting information regardless of faraway distance. The applications of these interactive means can be witnessed in the economy

such

as holding

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via Facetime or working from home with the use of

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, which means the waste

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for

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could be reduced and productivity in working

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would enhance.

Furthermore

, nowadays

such

cutting-edge

devices

are multi-functional,

in other words

, individuals could

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access

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the Internet in lieu of relying on the computer to read newspapers or seek

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.

As a result

, the

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of smart

devices

would be beneficial to not only the citizens but

also

the economy. With the aforementioned statements, I reaffirm that

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the advantages of innovative communication

devices

would eclipse the negative impacts.

Nonetheless

, citizens should not abuse the use of smartphones to keep body healthy and evade information leaking.