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With the rapid advancement of communication technology: smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#advancement #communication #technology #phones #tablets #devices #people
It is no doubt that
the
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innovation in technology especially communication
devices
 offers chances for
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human
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 to have a convenient life.
Nonetheless
, some individuals oppose
this
 due to unwanted consequences to
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society. From my point of view, the benefits would overshadow the drawbacks on account of some reasons as follow. To commence with, the negative sides of technological
devices
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 development would be a contentious issue.
Firstly
, it is apparent that making use of
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smart phones
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 or tablets with high frequency would be detrimental to citizens’ health. According to WHO, mobile radiation wave has some repercussions on neuronal electrical activity
in particular
brain’s
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 alpha wave disruption, which deteriorates cognitive function, sleep, and various brain diseases including brain
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 are documented.
Secondly
, the personal information of mobile users would be unsecured when they upload it to their
cellphones
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.
That is
 justified by a recent survey by MIT university that approximately 55
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 of
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 on the Internet
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 the outcome of using unauthorized apps.
On the other hand
, the advantages of communication technology would be indisputable. Admittedly, without the invention of smartphones, inhabitants are incapable of transmitting information regardless of faraway distance. The applications of these interactive means can be witnessed in the economy
such
 as holding
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 via Facetime or working from home with the use of
cellphones
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, which means the waste
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 for
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 could be reduced and productivity in working
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would enhance.
Furthermore
, nowadays
such
 cutting-edge
devices
 are multi-functional,
in other words
, individuals could
also
 access
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the Internet in lieu of relying on the computer to read newspapers or seek
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.
As a result
, the
uses
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 of smart
devices
 would be beneficial to not only the citizens but
also
 the economy. With the aforementioned statements, I reaffirm that
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 the advantages of innovative communication
devices
 would eclipse the negative impacts.
Nonetheless
, citizens should not abuse the use of smartphones to keep body healthy and evade information leaking.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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