You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

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Thompson, Actually, I am course my

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about the best math teacher in the world and I listen about your recent retirement from the classes rooms. Because of that, I want to show you my gratitude and

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show you my work about you. Since I begin my studies at University all the time your lesson make me a better scientist and grown my knowledge and curiosity about the beautiful mathematical world. In my opinion, your career represents the best way to apply mathematics in the diary life

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your strict behaviour is an example of discipline and successful life at all levels, I remember all your lessons and

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your observations about real life when applying mathematics to university staff. To conclude I am so glad to offer my sincere respect and admiration for your help, patience, and love for your students. You are the best teacher in the world. Yours sincerely, Eduardo

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Nov 18, 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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6 paragraphs

156 words

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You recently learnt that the best teacher you ever had will be retiring soon. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your letter Explain how you heard about his/her retirement Describe what made him/her such a great teacher Say how your teacher affected your life

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