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These days, food travels long distances before reaching consumers, bad it is therefore believed that consuming locally grown food would bring about a number of economic and environmental benefits. Discuss advantages and disadvantages?

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Nowadays eating fresh and healthy
food
 is the utmost demand of every individual to maintain a good and disease
reesha
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reach
 life. Unfortunately, in
this
 present era, eating items spend a long duration on
its
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their
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 way from farms
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therefore
 it is argued, to cultivate edibles near
to
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our accommodation as it has many positive points regarding finance and surrounding space.
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 the pros and construction of the topic and in the end will present a valid conclusion. On the one hand, there are myriad advantages of growing fruits and vegetables.
To begin
 with, greenery
keep
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 our environment clean and clear as it utilizes carbon dioxide from it which is hazardous for human life.
In other words
, excess carbon dioxide in our air makes it impure and causes many respiratory diseases
therefore
,
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 of farms in our surrounding get us rid of
such
 diseases.
Furthermore
, people get fresh and healthy
food
 to eat which is very beneficial for our health and those edibles are more delicious as compared to stale items.
For instance
, eating fresh
food
 produce more red blood cells in our body which keep us fit both physically and mentally.
Moreover
, our efforts in growing
food
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 helpful to us in saving money as it is
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expensive
inexpensive
nexpensive
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expensive
 for us.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages to the topic as well.
Firstly
 farming consumed
our
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 immense time due to a lot of
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hard work
hardwork
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hard work
 in it. To illustrate
this
 point, I have noticed my uncle as he is a farmer,
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spends almost half of his time in his field and
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 not get free hours to do many pivotal chores.
Secondly
, areas near
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trees and plants
is
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 full of mosquitoes and different insects which is
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 of many health problems.
Thirdly
, cultivating crops needs
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spacious land which is not available to everyone. To sum up,
although
 there are some negative aspects of farming.
Nevertheless
, the positive aspects are far more
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imperative to us and our environment.
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