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People are starting to think that the idea of having a single career is an old fashioned one and that having several part-time jobs is better. Do the benefits outweigh the disadvantage?

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The idea of having a single
job
 is an old style according to numerous individuals.
However
, others argue that having multiple part-time jobs is much better. In the
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 I will discuss having a single
career
 outweigh the disadvantage.
First
 of all, having a single
career
 gives a person benefits which the part-timer is not eligible
.
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For example
 in the Philippines working in one company for a long period of time, they will be given health insurance that can even extend to their relatives.
Furthermore
, financial assistance will be annually given as a part of the compensation to their hard-working employees.
Furthermore
, Being on a single
Job
 makes a person more efficient at their
job
 because they are totally familiar with the workflow, they
also
 tend to develop their way how making their task faster. A study published by "Publicus Asia" that 80% of individuals who
work
 in a single
job
 are able to generate more ideas to expedite the
work
 process of a company or organization they are working for.
However
, having several part-time works
also
 has benefits as you can
work
 in the comfort of your home without the need to travel to the office where you can have a peaceful mind and not get distracted by your colleagues.
For example
 , in ,India most people aged 25-40 are preferred to
work
 as a part-timer because they feel it is much more practical and
also
 can reduce their expenses. In conclusion, It really depends on the people which type of
career
 fits them as long as it is more beneficial for them and improves the quality of their life.
However
, the benefits of having a full-time
career
 are far greater than having several part-time jobs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traditional
  • conventional
  • evolving
  • versatile
  • adaptable
  • opportunities
  • potential
  • diversify
  • risk
  • balance
  • prioritize
  • challenges
  • job security
  • exhaustion
  • burnout
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
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