One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Compared to the past, our living conditions and our life expectancy have increased due to better medical

care

.

This

improvement has brought to our life several benefits but

also

problems

. In

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I’m going to discuss

firstly

advantages and

then

about disadvantages and

finally

a conclusion on the discussion. I’d like to mention several factors that allow science and medicine innovation to be seen as benefits.

Firstly

, thanks to improved medical

care

it’s rare and unusual to lose relatives or friends because of illness. For ,instance nowadays is easier and

also

faster to fight against pandemics, and our recent condition is proof of that.

In addition

, a consequence of having a higher life expectancy is the possibility to think more about our future and our project, not living as if there could be no tomorrow as our ancestors used to. ,

Lastly

medical

care

and its development create a positive circle, it’ll be less probable the diffusion of new bacteria or infection if our living conditions continue to improve.

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spread good health could bring

also

problems

.

For example

one of the main

problems

during these years is the overpopulation of some global areas. Being so much could bring to zero the positive effects of medical revolutions. Not only for

problems

related to personal

care

but

also

to food supply maybe. Other aspects need to be discussed: the great difference between developed countries and not. The

first

category is able to receive almost all the technology and machines for good medical

care

, while others have several

problems

with their reception. In ,

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I’d say that’s obviously impossible to deny medical

care

and its development, but countries and international organizations should give the possibility for the poorest countries to benefit at the same level.