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News channels only give good news on publications. Do you agree or disagree

#news #channels #publications
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It is well known that over time
media
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 has been changing. Nowadays, it can be seen different
news
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 channels and topics specifically for the kind
audience
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of audience
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 who are heading,
nevertheless
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, that does not mean the publications given are only good. I completely disagree with
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 statement, in
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reason
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 why it is not true.
To begin
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shared
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 positive
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 with the audience
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apply
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is almost impossible because of the
rapidly
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 advance of
the
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technology, with the creation of
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social
media
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such
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 as Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram the public can have
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information
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 in a fast way. No one can deny
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globalization and one of
their
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its
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 consequences is that
people
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 are more connected
for
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all
the
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 globe,
therefore
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, do not post bad
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 it is difficult, almost impossible.
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, even if a channel does not share
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news
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 that
it
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is happening in a country, with the new communication tools
people
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 will have the
information
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 very fast. Another significant aspect relates
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media
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to media
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 and journalists has the obligation to tell the truth,
for example
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,
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assure
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assures
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 the importance of
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true
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communicate
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 to the
people
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 even if it is good or bad.
On the other hand
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, for a channel it would be a good strategy only communicate good
news
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,
hence
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 they can be more profitable against their competence.
However
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,
this
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 could not
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possible,
thus
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the
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technology had allowed to
people
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 have
the
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information
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 faster than ever, even
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 is fake
news
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. To conclude, in my opinion, the
news
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 can not only publish good
news
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 and their channel, one reason
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apply
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is the professionalism a
media
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 should have and
other
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the other
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 is the
advance
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 technology
inform
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informs
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 publications faster than ever to the community.
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