A sports club in your area is about to be closed and you oppose to that. Write a letter to the manager and make suggestions why it is important that the club stays open.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Recently I hear that you intend to close your

club

, as a member of your

club

for two straight years, I would like to ask you to change your mind and let

this

club

stay open. For the past two years, me and

this

neighbourhood, have got in better shape because of your

club

. It has all sorts of equipment and the best trainers in the gym ,

Also

the pool is huge so at any time, we can swim without distraction.

Moreover

, my friend, Jim, comes from another side of the city to join the karate class. To sum up, Due to the lack of sports clubs in

this

vicinity, I ask you to come up with an idea to stay open. You can increase the fee for some sort of sports that costs more, or advertise throughout the neighbourhood so other people join in. I would like to help you,

hence

If you need any suggestions, please call me. Best wishes, Tom

Submitted by niligh on Fri Nov 18 2022

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