Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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We can broadly categorise
people
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into two main segments: the
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segment of
people
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are comfortable with living in the same place, eating the same types of food, and having a career that involves pretty much doing the same thing and taking almost no
risks
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, while others are completely the opposite who find the meaning of
life
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through
risks
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and
challenges
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and are not afraid of trying new
things
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. Personally, I like to take
risks
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, face
challenges
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and enjoy the diversity of the world through travelling and favour the
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group of
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.
People
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who avoid
challenges
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or scarcely try new
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are comfortable with the lifestyle they already have. They do not want to make
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complicated by taking on new
challenges
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that might bring misery or dissatisfaction to their
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.
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people
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are often contended with whatever they have and wish to stay in their comfort zone. Since they are afraid of failure, their
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is
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limited. We can see many
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around us who fall in
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category, who, despite seeing potential in a new career, never dare to change their existing job or even detest the idea of trying new food.
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, there are
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who believe that change is constant and that taking on
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is something that makes
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thrilling and enjoyable. They embrace new ideas, travel to difficult places, try new food, experience diversity of
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and culture, and get easily bored doing the same thing for a long. These
people
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take
risks
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that bring
success
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. But
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success
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is not always guaranteed as failure can
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befall them. I
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know
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people
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, and I consider myself one of them. They are often the trailblazer and inventors, builders and creators of new
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and ideas.
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, despite having a good job in a multinational company, one of my cousins started a boutique business. No one
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supported his move, but now he is so successful that many others cite him as an example of
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. In conclusion, being in the comfort zone, doing familiar
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and taking minimal
risks
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may guarantee comfort and stability in
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but real
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and great inventions and ideas come from taking
risks
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and embracing
challenges
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. I am always in favour of the
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type of attitude that makes
life
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worth living.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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