‘Cannabis has been classified as a Class B drug in the UK since 2008 and carries a prison sentence of up to five years for possession.’ (Source: The Week) Many countries have decriminalised the use of cannabis and as a result have seen a reduction in drug related crime. Should cannabis and other soft drugs use be legalised? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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the authority should permit

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and other kinds of stimulants. While some claim that legitimizing the

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cannabis

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crime, the opposite makes a statement that

cannabis

should be legalised. In my opinion,

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urgent problem. It is obvious to note that approving people to consume Class B drug types does

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for the lives of residents.

Cannabis

is considered a type of medicine – some scientific findings demonstrated cannabinoid in

cannabis

is commonly

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for certain diseases and has

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effect on humans.

For instance

, Holland and some states in America permit growing and trading

cannabis

in both of healthcare system and entertainment. In terms of

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, they are used as a therapy to treat and control certain cancers. Regarding recreation, marijuana induces a feeling of euphoria and relaxation in its users.

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cannabis

and other kinds of

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should be approved for widespread

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by the authority.

Although

accepting to utilize Class B classification

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has some advantages, it is bad for people to overdose. Authorizing communities to make

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and

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these

drugs

can considerably increase medical risks and addiction rates among those who

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them.

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is because

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make them feel

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and rarely able to control the right frame of mind.

For example

, statistics show that driving under influence of Class B

drugs

has caused countless traffic accidents in the US, where these things are legal.

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, if the government enacts a law to

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marijuana, it will endanger

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of residents and communities. In my conclusion, allowing the entire population to have the right to

use

cannabis

and other genres of

drugs

bring more harm than good. For that reason, these things still should be controlled by the government.