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In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded in the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

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These days, learning of knowledge is increasing through the
internet
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, as well, very much material is being uploaded on the
internet
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, it is easier to find the necessary
information
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 on the
internet
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 than in
books
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, it has its own drawbacks and benefits. In
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, finding and borrowing on
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 is easier than finding
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 in a library because everything is uploaded to the
internet
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.
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, people would not spend their money and time on transport
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 as buses, trains and others, to go to libraries or book shops. As well as, in my ,country the demand for foreign
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 is the highest but it is very difficult to find them in the Uzbek library
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 most students download them online.
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, recently, I download a new English book from the
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 and it was cheaper for me than other library
books
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, one the drawback is that not all
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 on the
internet
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 is more reliable than
books
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. To take an example, yesterday, I read new
information
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 online but I compared it to a book and it was not true at that time, I believed that all
information
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 on the
internet
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 was not true.
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, using too much of it down our eyesight. In conclusion, in my opinion, it is good for our life if we use it effectively and I prefer to use the
internet
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 than
books
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning
  • Virtual libraries
  • Cyberspace
  • Search engine literacy
  • Critical evaluation skills
  • Open-source information
  • Data mining
  • Intellectual property
  • Digital preservation
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