Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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types
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university
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programs
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instance
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instance
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with
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bachelor's
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the list
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the requirement
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requirements
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unnecessary
where
will not help them in practice.
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the university
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people
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on
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chooses
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preferable
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this
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the
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