Baeza Academy. Advantages disadvantages. What is done there, personal experience

My short experience
life
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in Baeza
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paper focuses on the advantages and disadvantages of Baeza
academy
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.
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of all, I will explain the advantages.
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, I will consider the disadvantages.
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, I will talk about the routine there and my personal experience and I will summarize both aspects. In my
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the
Academy
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has a lot of advantages.
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as meeting new people, because you have to live there for nine
months
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. Some friends will be for
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whole life.
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, during the time you were at
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academy
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the academy
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we were taking all the knowledge possible to become a Guardia Civil.
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, while you are living in Baeza you don’t have payments and you have some income as well.
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, I would like
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to indicate some disadvantages.
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, as I said before you have to live there for ninth
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,
that
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means you are a long time without seeing
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family, friends, girl or
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boyfriend
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boy friend
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.
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you don’t have payments there maybe you have payments at
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home and sometimes the money that you earn is not enough.
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, you have to go to all places running due to you don’t have enough time. As I see it, I can not really comment because I only was for two
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,
that
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means that I had to learn in two
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what people
learns
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in nine. So, we began early
at
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morning
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the morning
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with the theory classes,
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practice, personal defence and computer classes.
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, I consider my experience so good because I was at home for 5
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and I met kind people. In conclusion, the
academy
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has good and bad
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things
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thins
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, some are necessary for being a Guardia civil and others are unnecessary and you will learn working.

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