In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

Technology is developing around the world, with new technological advancements in the automobile industry, future all
vehicles
will be autonomous and passengers will be the only person travelling inside. I believe the multitude of advantages
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shows the disadvantages and the subsequent paragraph will elaborate
further
. To commence, today 90% of road accidents occur due to human error
such
as speeding or drowsy driving,
as a result
, human
drivers
are responsible for hundreds if not thousands of
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. With the advent of
driverless
vehicles
, accident rates can be reduced. Since the
vehicles
would be run and controlled by software and technology the risk of devastating accidents could be eliminated in the future.
For example
, in ,America the government has introduced
driverless
buses in recent years while it is not totally
driverless
. The
drivers
still need to remain seated but most of the buses are controlled automatically.
Driverless
vehicles
will help
people
to control their speed and they can have a safe ride. On the negative side, it is true that autonomy has some disadvantages
such
as a large proportion of
people
will lose their job. Nowadays, a plethora of
people
are making a living by driving, most of them are truck
drivers
, school bus
drivers
or delivery couriers. Imagine all these
people
are made redundant by self-driving
vehicles
, and the employment rate as well as the country’s economy will face a huge threat. many
people
rely on driver jobs, especially in developing countries.
However
,
this
can be avoided if government provide the necessary skills and provide them with jobs in
a
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different sector. In conclusion,
although
self-driving
vehicles
would result in high employment losses they can be eliminated by new skills and jobs, I believe the downside has greatly outweighed the upside in that these
vehicles
could help save life’s of humans, control their speed and have a safe journey.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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