With the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What do you think of the importance of letter-writing?

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advanced, the
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smart phones
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and computers is becoming increasingly popular around the world. Some might think that
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messages
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and emails will substitute the traditional
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However
, I believe that the importance of writing letters can’t be replaced and writing
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won’t
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.
To begin
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much more convenient and easy than
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since people only need to
use
a finger or two to communicate with others.
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, with the development of
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we can contact
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others within seconds,
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phones and computers can be
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friendly, due to the reduced
use
of paper.
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texting brings, I still regard it will not
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over
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hand writing
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in the future. The main reason is
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can show a gesture of love, which texting can’t achieve.
For example
, writing your friend a birthday card will make her happier than,
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sending her birthday texts.
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we often feel more touched by letters
instead
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numerous benefits, both for humans and the environment,
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still cannot be replaced.
As a result
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will not totally disappear in the foreseeing future.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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