In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should recieve adult punishment. To what extent do you agree?

It is true that the crime rate is increasing among teenagers. While the government is trying to prevent

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, many people believe that youth should be punished like adults. I strongly agree with the idea that teenagers must be punished for their

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in the following paragraphs. Though it is true that juveniles are punished less than grown

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for their trespasses. And

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causes the young generation not to return from their actions and to repeat

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action again.

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, in some

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cannot be

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even if they kill someone. If states introduce certain chastisements for youth, it can prevent future serious felonies.

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, it is widely believed that old humans have better judgement than children.

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, some folks argue that being a good man does not require age. It should

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be mentioned that their parents can

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, if children are not given enough attention or if there is a lot of disagreement in the family, it has a great impact on the child's psyche.

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, the child unknowingly becomes involved in crime. In conclusion, there is a rise in the number of trespasses made by youngsters. While some people suppose that criminals who are even really young should

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of mature age punishments.

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, I strongly agree that lawbreakers should get the same punishment

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because every infraction of the law should not go unpunished.