Write a letter to your friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you’d like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on use of images on the web site.

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Dear Alice, I hope you are doing well!

Firstly

, I wanted to inform you that I have started selling traditional wear to my nearby people, and by God's grace it is going well. Now, I need your help in promoting my business online, so if you have free time can you please develop a

website

where I can sell online

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I want my

website

to be simple and user-friendly, as it is for people whose age is above 25, so I want them to purchase clothes without any hassle. On the

website

landing page, you can add some text related to my business, I'll send it to you separately, and

also

put some collections in the header so that the products can be easily distinguished and accessed. In fact, must provide my contact information, so that if they have any queries they can call me. I'll share pictures of some suits with you, which you can add now to the

website

Moreover

, provide me with some kind of manual so that I can update my

website

later on. All the best. Thank you in advance. Please let me know if you need anything from my side. Regards, Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Sat Nov 19 2022

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7 paragraphs

198 words

8.50

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