Write a letter to your friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you’d like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on use of images on the web site.

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Dear Alice, I hope you are doing well!

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, I wanted to inform you that I have started selling traditional wear to my nearby people, and by God's grace it is going well. Now, I need your help in promoting my business online, so if you have free time can you please develop a

website

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where I can sell online

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I want my

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to be simple and user-friendly, as it is for people whose age is above 25, so I want them to purchase clothes without any hassle. On the

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landing page, you can add some text related to my business, I'll send it to you separately, and

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put some collections in the header so that the products can be easily distinguished and accessed. In fact, must provide my contact information, so that if they have any queries they can call me. I'll share pictures of some suits with you, which you can add now to the

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, provide me with some kind of manual so that I can update my

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later on. All the best. Thank you in advance. Please let me know if you need anything from my side. Regards, Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Sat Nov 19 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

198 words

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Write a letter to your friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you’d like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on use of images on the web site.

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Living in country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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