Nowadays, governments are trying to encourage people to use buses or subways for their daily travel. What are the advantages of forms of public transport like these?

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nowadays, society is growing day by day,
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that development brings a lot of
gain
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but
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leaves
many
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pain.
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places
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where there is good economic development, often there are many
people
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living there. That's definitely a good thing, because the more
people
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living there, the more human resources there will be, but with it comes traffic congestion. because the large the number of
people
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, the greater the number of vehicles. that's why
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governments
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goverments
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governments
are trying to
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encourage
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encourage
people
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to use buses or subways for their daily travel
,
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because
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help
reduce
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traffic congestion and
save
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more time. Cost to use buses and subways
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also
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much
cheapter
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cheaper
compare to cars or
motocrycles
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motorcycles
. Not only cheap and save time but
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bring safety for persons.
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, busses and subways
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the right choice that the
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governments
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government
have set
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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