People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

There is a controversial notion heating a debate that immigrants should adapt to new conventions and customs of that country.
However
, I completely agree with
this
opinion. It is clear that the custom of the country is important to local
people
,
therefore
newcomers who tend to settle in one bucolic should have knowledge of its tradition. Because if migrants do not know about
this
, they can face some difficult issues or have difficulty
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integrating with other
people
which can create a cultural
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barries
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.For
this
reason, if they do not know about the habit, they may
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get into the pitfalls
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crime
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, Understanding about laws of
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will help foreigners not be punished for falling foul of the law.
For instance
, in
Sigapore
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Singapore
,
people
will be fined if they throw trash or litter anywhere.
On the other hand
, there are
also
many benefits for foreigners to understand new
habit
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.One advantage is that they will be more welcomed and increase
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of brotherhood.
Additionally
, if the immigrants understand clearly one country’s
habit
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, they can
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easily
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take part in
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the festival
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festival
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festivals
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and have
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understanding.
For example
, if they wear
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traditional custom
such
as
:
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Ao Dai or Kimono, they will gain more respect from local
people
and increase the sense of harmony.
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is that they can gain more money from business activities, through understanding their customers which
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their
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products
produts
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products
and gain more profit.
Finally
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according to the argument mentioned above it has clearly indicated that,
people
must follow the habits and the traditions of a new society when they will not live in that nation.
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