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Some people believe that educational qualifications will always bring success in life. Other people say that educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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As educated
people
 are highly respected in our society. But One group of
people
 argues that high academic achievement equals more success while others disagree.in
this
 6essay I will discuss both sides of
this
. Education is very important for us to achieve our goals. In ,
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school we learnt so many subjects
such
 as maths and science. When learning science and maths improves our logical thinking skills. And
also
 develop our problem-solving skills. When wein problem it helps us to solve that problem. When we educate well we can find a good job.
Then
 we can get a good salary.
For example
,
people
 who are not educated well , can't find a good job. So he got a poor salary.
then
 he want to work hard.
Therefore
 I
then
people
 need to learn.
On the other hand
,some
people
 think academic achievement can improve life better.They earn money using these skills.
For instance
, a famous person is Isaak newton who dropout the school.but uses his methods for scientists. Not only Isaac newton, but bill gates steve
also
 jobs are famous
people
 who don't get higher studies. But they are famous and they have good health. And
also
 they are successful
people
. In conclusion, indiquait educate
people
 to keep their name bright place in history. But that method is not successful for all the person. So I believe education is very important for us. It bright our life nicely
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