We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree.

Today’s world cannot be imagined without the use of technology because

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the internet has come up with

an

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obvious benefits but the safety and access limit of

data

covered up its avail. I completely agree with the opinion and

this

essay will show that

people

cannot control their

privacy

and that misusing information is dangerous. To commence with,

privacy

is an expensive thing in our sophisticated life. Though the internet makes our daily life much easier but the real fact is individuals are just lost their

privacy

and many more

people

don’t even concern about

this

.

For instance

, we all have a Gmail account that we used for various purposes but when we sometime used that google account

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any unauthorized websites it just took some information from our account like our name, phone number and email address.

This

is the way how our

privacy

gets hampered.

Secondly

, by using several kinds of social media network sites we lost our different kinds of personal

data

and anyone with bad intentions can easily collect

this

data

as well as they can have misused these

data

if they want.

For example

, if any

people

share their personal photo on any social media or some kind of dating-related app,

then

it is quite facile for bad

people

who want to use the photo for

the

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illegal purposes like for running a fake id and

this

idea is too harmful to the real one. To conclude, Though technology makes everything so fast pace

but

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a lot of insecurities

of

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data

is

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extremely common and

also

misusing the collected

data

is harmful to

the

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real

people

.