Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some individuals argue that the most effective means of enhancing public

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is by providing an increased number of sports establishments. Others are of the view that it will have a minute impact on general well-being and that other means are needed.

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will enhance the masses' well-being, and

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state why I believe that awareness of other aspects

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as improved dieting, regular

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screening and environmental sanitation are necessary. On the one hand, the availability of more sports facilities will lead to better

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for the masses.

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is because enacting more

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for sporting will encourage the culture of regular exercising, which will in turn help individuals to live a better life.

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, obesity which is known to predispose people to various illnesses will be avoided, leading to a decrease in the mortality rate in the country.

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, when more gym

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are easily accessible, individuals in the country will be motivated to utilize its services.

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, there are other means of contributing to the public well-being other than just the provision of more numbers of sports buildings. One major way of improving public fitness is by providing awareness or education on the importance of good dieting, regular

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screening and environmental hygiene. The reason for

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the intake of a balanced diet, going for regular well-being check-up and environmental cleanliness, affects the totality of the individual

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. As an adequate diet helps in boosting immunity, environmental sanitation eradicates breeding sites for disease vectors, while going for routine

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visits allows for early detection and treatment of illnesses.

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, I am

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of the view that education in these areas mentioned above as it concerns

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, will help in the prevention of illnesses.

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, the education of pregnant women on the importance of keeping their environment clean by clearing all stagnant water will destroy mosquito breeding sites has helped in reducing the maternal mortality rate in Nigeria. In conclusion,

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the availability of more sporting

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will improve the well-being of the people, I am of the view that insight into the need for an adequate diet, good environmental hygiene and regular

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screening should

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be considered.

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, appropriate authorities should provide seminars and outreach to the masses on primary

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prevention components.