There has been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvement in people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The remarkable enhancement in the

lives

of men and women has been said to be

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a result of great

improvement

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improvements

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in technology. Personally, I strongly agree with

this

statement because of its positive impact on

medicine

,

also

, the

invention

of household and mobile

devices

has helped in making our

lives

easier.

To begin

, high technology has led to

betterment

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the betterment

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of human life through its positive impacts on

medicine

and education

for example

. In the aspect of

Medicine

, modern

medicine

is a product of technological advancement. Today, there is improved medical care and

this

has been achieved through the

used

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of drugs, radiation and surgery to treat diseases.

As a result

, life expectancy is increased and

less

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people suffer from the heartache of losing a loved one.

Also

, the use of computers in the hospital since the

invention

of the Electronic Health

record

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system has helped in ensuring effective documentation,

facilitating

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retrieval of patients' data in the future.

Thus

client's treatment progress can be easily monitored.

For example

, a Diabetic patient's medical history once entered into the health record system can be retrieved from the

last

five years just by entering the client's code or hospital number into the system.

In addition

, there are other ways in which technology has made our

lives

easier. The

invention

of household

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

pieces of equipment

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and

devices

such

as vacuum cleaners,

microwave

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the microwave

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machine

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machines

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,

cookers

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and cookers

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have helped in making our daily chores less taxing.

Thus

, allowing us enough time for our work and leisure activities like watching television and spending time with family and friends.

Furthermore

, the

invention

of mobile

devices

and online platforms like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and WhatsApp has helped in making our communication more effective and convenient. People can easily connect with their Friends, families and colleagues from wherever they are and receive feedback almost immediately on these platforms. Aside from these, mobile

devices

are very portable and can perform various functions

such

as texting, surfing the internet and making calls as compared to a standard telephone.

Thus

, bringing us closer to the people we love and breaking the barrier of distance in communication. In conclusion, I strongly agree that technological development has changed the

lives

of men and women for the better in terms of its positive contributions to

Medicine

and innovations of mobile and household

devices

.