More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem? Problem and solution

In
this
new era,it is observed that a lot of animal
species
have gone extinct and some
animals
are on the endangered list. While there are a number of reasons behind
this
, certain measures can be taken with a view to mitigating
this
problem. Two main
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elements
lead to
this
problem.
To begin
with, one of the
mejor
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major
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reasons
resons
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reasons
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the
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global
gobal
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global
warming.
This
is due to the fact that global warming and changing
temperature
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are mostly accomplish
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by humans.The growth of population has increased dramatically,
people
desire more
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field
fild
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fields
to grow more food to complete more
people
claim.For
this
why
people
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trees
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and destroy
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the forest
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forest
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,which
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indeed
detrimental
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impact on
animals
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life.As a
consiquence
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consequence
,
the
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wild
animals
become extinct day by day.
Moreover
,accommodation and
indutrilaizetion
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industrialization
for
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humans
humens
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humans
they cut down
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and destroy
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forest
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,
these
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type
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of deforestation animal
species
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their
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their
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the carelessness of
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humans
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humans
.
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,the
animals
are dying
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and
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causing
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disturbance in the ecological system. Several steps can be taken in order to overcome
this
problem.In the
first
place,
government
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should
takeing
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taking
take
action against global warming.
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,they should create
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awareness
awerness
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awareness
about global warming,how it create
harmful
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effect on animal
species
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extinct and how many
species
are in endangered these days.They should
also
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normal masses to help by taking certain steps to save them.
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,it is
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important
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important
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deforestation
deforestetion
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caused
of
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extinction,
animals
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affecting
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affecting
their lives and
people
creating ecological imbalance. To recapitulate,
people
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liable
forvthe
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for the
animal
species
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to the level of extinction.
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,to save
such
animals
,it is
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not
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only
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but
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general public to join together
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for their lives and save the endangered
animals
.
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