The development o f tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

As a point of departure, it is a fact that
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the English
idiom
actually is the best way for international communication and
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trades and business accessible to many
countries
not only the United States and anglophone-speaking
countries
around the
world
. Another benefit which makes some difference among other languages is the relatively big access, through the internet to learn the
idiom
,
for example
, free courses and English programs on YouTube. These are very important references in the business
world
when you have one only type of communication, between the best part of
this
process will come globalization ideas an efficient and accessible reality.
In contrast
, some communities around the
world
think differently, because
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will be lost ancestral languages like indigenous which exist centuries ago.
Also
, the tribal groups have many disadvantages in front of big technologies development and the internet expansion which actually are in English
idiom
. Because those groups are fighting against their imminent extinction. The libraries can store a lot of information about the lost languages but if the
world
forgets that language will disappear forever. To conclude, establishing one only way to connect humankind through an
idiom
without forgetting other
countries
' traditions and culture, will contribute to making a successful future in the business and trade global area but
also
in the partnership between the
countries
.
However
, is important that all the idioms and language organizations around the
world
should be more careful in preserving the old traditions, in support of future generations' knowledge.
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