Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.

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society is putting more emphasis on people’s

looking

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,some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly.

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contrary

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,some others value the quality of

work

above appearance. As far as I am concerned,the

first

group of people might be more solicitude for their impressions to others, especially to the clients.Those people deem the apparel a symbol of their attitude towards the business ,and officially dressed

also

express

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that they

are

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care

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more

care

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about

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cooperation,while the other group of people think making the

work

perfectly done can be more convincing.After all,

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worker’s

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workers’

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duty is

accomplishing

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their

work

carefully,

instead

of putting too much attention on their own looking. Well,personally speaking, the quality of

work

does have its importance,but in some necessary

situation

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,the

outlooks

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is important as well.

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,in my father’s company,workers can wear

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clothes which

makes

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them feel more comfortable,when they are going to meet the clients or have a meeting,

however

,they are demanded

for

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officially

dressing

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dress

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.

That is

to say,the dressing can be resilient,but formal attire is obviously needed in specific areas. In short,those two views both have their reasonableness, but in our daily lives,we should unite them reasonably to make our

works

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work

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more efficient.