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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. D you think the avantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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With the modern developments in the medical industry, the expected
life
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people
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increased considerably, during the
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 is expected to be continued in the future. There are many social and
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financial
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financial
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life
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 outweigh the negative
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 as described below. On one hand, there are many advantages of increased
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life times
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 of individuals
such
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, preserving cultures and facilitating child care. For an instance ,
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 decades back the
life
 expectancy of
people
 vary around 60~65
years
, and now it has
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increased
up
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to 75~80
years
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 average.
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present
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 the average retirement age of
people
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and around 60
years
.
That is
,
people
 can engage in productive activities for additional 15
years
.
Moreover
 , elderly
people
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 good health
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 can look after their
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grandkids
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grand kids
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 by releasing their
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parents
patents
partents
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parents
 for work.
This
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 of
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grand kids
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 with cultural showers, as well as
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 the stresses of the young
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.
On the other hand
, when
people
 live long lives there is a risk of
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over population
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. As we all
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aware
, our planet has limited
resources
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 population will
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adversely
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adversely
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the available share of
the
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resources
.
However
, we can overcome
this
 issue by exploring new
resources
 and increasing the usage efficiency of the existing
resources
. To conclude, I strongly believe that the social and financial
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benefits
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benefits
 of increased
life
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outweigh the negative
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 of the same as described above.
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