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some people tend to take temporary jobs, for they have time to do other things. Do the advantage outweighs disadvantage

#people #jobs #time #advantage
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 and independence have been the recent development among most individuals. A tentative
job
 makes
one
 versatile and open to different opinions and for
this
, I think there are more
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positive
postive
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positive
 effects than negative ones.
This
 essay will be analyzing both the upside as well as the downside of having a tentative
job
. The most important reason
of
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 having a temporary is the ability of
one
 to manage his own company in terms of decisions, finance,
time
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and time
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 spent and be able to choose
who
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 to work with,without having to give account to anyone.
secondly
,
one
 may have the advantage of working
else
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elsewhere
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where
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 to make more income and achieve more knowledge in business management.
Thirdly
, For some students who are having financial struggles in school, they can
also
 benefit from temporary jobs if their school syllabus
are
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 convenient for them.
lastly
,
one
 can have the motivation to strive for more ways of
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 successful
instead
 of being so relaxed in their current state. The major downside of not having a permanent is
job
 security, which means that
one
 can be
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 at any given time and we have to start from the crash.
In addition
, the protocol
in
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 securing a permanent
job
 can be discouraging and even not certain.
Furthermore
,
individual
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individuals
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 won't have control over
job
 convenience, which is the ability to choose the time available for them. In conclusion, the advantage
have
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more
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 positive
effect
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effects
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 in securing a temporary
job
 than the disadvantage.
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