Some people believe that it is wrong for professional athletes to compete in the Olympics because their strong financial backing and training give them an unfair advantage over the other athletes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some individuals think it is not fair that professional
athletes
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to race in the
Olympics
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, as their financial power and training create them an advantage over the other
athletes
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. I completely agree with
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opinion, because professional
athletes
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have more
experience
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than others and, as the
Olympics
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held
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once every four years, some
chance
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should be given to amateur
athletes
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.
First
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of all,
athletes
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who have more
experience
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in
sport
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activities are much
lucky
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more lucky
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than other
athletes
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. While usual sportsmen attend
on
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competitions once or two times
in
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a year, professionals can
compete
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much more than that. That’s why they can’t gain
experience
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enough.
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,
financial
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the financial
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situation can affect
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, because it claims a lot of time and money to prepare for the
Olympics
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.
Athletes
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should have
special
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a special
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trainer
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and they have to travel
other
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to other
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countries
for
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to
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gain
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the gain
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experience
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. All of
this
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requires money,
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as
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and as
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a result, these
athletes
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couldn’t get much
experience
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.
Olympic
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The Olympic
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games
held
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are held
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once every four years and it is one of the most important races in the world. It is a big
chance
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for amateur players to prove themselves. As professional players compete
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this
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in this
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competition, other
athletes
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nearly have no
chance
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to win
title
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the title
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.
For example
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,
player
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the player
a player
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who has world titles can
also
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attend
in
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apply
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the
Olympics
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and it is not fair. In conclusion, I agree with the opinion that professionals should not compete in the
Olympics
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,
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because they have more knowledge and other
athletes
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should have to
chance
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to win the prize.
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