Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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teacher, I have spotted my Use synonyms
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, the benefit of Linking Words
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use is undeniable.
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have affected our life ever since their advent, especially, how it has changed our habit of taking in information. Spontaneously are we notified about almost everything in the world within a ‘ting’ of our pocket-Use synonyms
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is universally considered a serious distraction. Imagine the same thing happens to schoolgoers, whose attention span is shorter than a goldfish. Linking Words
For instance
, putting aside how engaged my lecture is, I more than usual catch some of my teenage Linking Words
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using Use synonyms
phones
during class, even when important points of the lesson are being summarized. I wonder how much can those young minds learn when they are being bothered with TikTok videos and Instagram reels. Use synonyms
Moreover
, allowing Linking Words
phones
in schools means that Use synonyms
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are able to take photos and record videos to post directly to the internet. Everyone knows that media is a two-sided knife and a photo or a video does not tell the whole story, which may falsely direct media attention and encourages unwelcomed behaviours within the Use synonyms
school
campus.
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, mobile Linking Words
phones
are really useful in keeping connections between parents and their children these days. It is not that Use synonyms
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is no longer a sanctuary where parent-Use synonyms
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mutual trust is absolute, but it is that parents are too busy to pick up their children in time or that the trip from home to Use synonyms
school
is now too dangerous for a youngster to go alone that the parents, who are working, want to keep track of their children with Use synonyms
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calls. In another aspect, with the introduction of student-centred teaching methods, modern smartphones, as a mean of an information search engine, Use synonyms
also
shows how much it benefits research work at Linking Words
school
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access to a resourceful platform for information searching immediately. Use synonyms
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somehow challenges the idea of banning campus Linking Words
phone
use.
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as tablets or smart libraries and free Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite