In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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of occupying a temporary
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apartment
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in some nations.
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behind it, as well as the consequence of the stream. In my view, having own
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is a great essential step taken by a man toward his family and himself. To some
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, owning a
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refers many things
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as
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fulfilling
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of having own
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, designing personal space with imagination and requirements, settling down in a place for peace, etc. It provides the feeling of safety and security, without paying attention
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house
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rent
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. Every month a huge amount of money
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by
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as the charge of
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, which
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the
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under pressure who live
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rental
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a rental
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house
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.
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rent
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imposed by the
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owner to the tenants became a burden day by day,
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,
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forbidden
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forbidden
strictly from doing any change inside
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it
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irritating who living in the
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, the survey
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2019, based on Chittagong city
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rent
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shows that
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house
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charge
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increased
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by 25
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% from 2015-2017,which have a negative effect on the
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who hire
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a house
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and motivated them to
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house
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the house
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for themselves. If
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go for
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possessing
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possessing
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home
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a home
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then
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staying on
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, it will demonstrate more benefits than
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demerits
.
First
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of all, individuals will be more careful on maintain the place they have rather than they take care of a rental
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. They may not damage anything like walls,
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glasses
of windows, swages site, kitchen etc, as it is their own property, which damage would cost themselves.
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,
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drawback
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also
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,
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may stuck in a city while it may demand shifting to another town for job or study
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.
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may face security and
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maintenance
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maintenance
problems which may
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huge
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charge
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. Though there are disadvantages,
positive
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the positive
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sides of buying an
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apartment
apparent
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apartment
overweight the negative sides. To conclude, considering
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both points discussed above, the most logical conclusion to be drawn is that, possessing a
home
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or an
apparment
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apartment
is far better than staying on
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. In my opinion,
people
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feel much
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in private property rather than charging a
house
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for themselves. It gives
people
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feeling
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a feeling
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of security and they feel rooted
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in themselves
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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