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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views

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It is said that involving education, especially attending university or college is the best way to have a perfected occupation, whistle other way is to have a career after graduation.
People
 can get benefits from studying at educational institutions. When
people
 study at
school
, they will have more opportunities to get a well-paid
job
. Because their academic qualifications can meet the requirement of big firms,
also
 they are better prepared for their future career by developing essential skills
such
 as
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 calculating, a statistic which help them in their careers.Take Chinese students
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 example, the leader with successful careers tend to graduate from Tsinghua University, which is the university ranked top 1st in china.
Moreover
, if
people
 do not attend
third
-level education, they will not have a preview of their future careers
as a result
 may suffer from boredom if their work does not suit them. For
this
 reason, they will quit their jobs and have
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 throughout their life.
For instance
, in VietNam students graduated from secondary
school
, who tend to work in the industry, which requires a lot of physical health
therefore
 they do not have a chance to change their life because of lacking a degree from
third
-level education. On other hand, if
people
 go straight to get a
job
 after
school
 there are some benefits they can gain. It will help
people
 have an accurate attitude to their future
job
, and
also
 gain a lot of experiment from their
job
 which will be helpful for them to purchase a higher- career and equip them with basic skills.
In addition
, when they have a
job
, they can earn a lot of
money
, which help them to live independently from their parent. They can learn
money
 management and time management to live effectively and become more respect their own
money
 since they have to make an effort to earn
money
 which can not be taught in
school
. In conclusion, both ways are
benefit
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Academic qualifications
  • Specialized skills
  • In-depth knowledge
  • Personal growth
  • Social development
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • Career progression
  • Professional networking
  • Education
  • Work experience
  • Successful career
  • Personal interests
  • Career goals
  • Decision-making process
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