In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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In today's generation

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started watching Netflix there are many documentaries which are made for

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to watch so that they know what is happening in the world. There are many sources from

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people

can gather information. Novels and Tv crimes drama are becoming very popular because in books we only read and imagine the situation, but in tv shows, they actually show us fiction and tv crimes which makes

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see more and more and get information about it. I personally feel

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reading

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books one should watch shows and

drama

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dramas

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to exactly know what is happening there is

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demand for series because

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love watching

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and fiction

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makes

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possible to watch the series more often. In some countries,

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are more into novels because they love reading. There are many other popular novels based on true stories which make one understand how the world is and what all is happening in the world. It plays an important role in today's generation. It focuses on

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crime and makes

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aware

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it. It is

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useful for children to watch

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crime shows so that they can be aware of what is going on and

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make them aware of strangers and makes them mature and intelligent at the same time. The conclusion to

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topic is that it obviously makes

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understand and make them study about it but

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encourages

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fiction and

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shows for their own good and help children to know what is right for them.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.