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In many counties children are engages in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays there is a belief that
people
 should marry before their thirty. It is believed to be
a
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 perfect age in order to have a happier family. I recon and many surveys have shown
people
 who get married in their 20s usually have long
marriages
 and stronger relationships. In ,addition they can look after with children more meticulously.
First
 of all, getting married early is one of the most imperative decisions that individuals should take into consideration because of many reasons. The
first
 and foremost is that you will have a stable life.
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Norway University conducted a survey in 2002 on 50 families, and it showed that
people
 who have early
marriages
 have long-term happiness.
Moreover
, they
also
 look after their children more carefully than families who have late age
marriages
 which is due to the fact of the huge generation gap between the children and the parents.
On the other hand
,
people
’s needs have changed
last
 century. They used to get married in their early 20 before.
Nonetheless
, now they tend to marry at a very late age or they never get married.
In addition
,
this
 movement has spoiled the regular traditional family structure.
Consequently
, they stay away
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 being a part of a couple and don’t want to have commitment.
Therefore
, the population is getting old day by day, and we lose the support of the manufacturing workforce. To sum up,
people
 who have early
marriages
 tend to have long-term relationships and they raise up a more responsible generation.
Otherwise
, our traditional family pattern will spoil over time because they will refuse to marry, and it will affect our young population negatively.
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