Some people say that in our modern age because of advancement in digital technology it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills, but others believe handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss these views and state you opinion.

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Majority of the people believe that
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due to the advanced digital
technology
there is no need for handwriting skills anymore.
However
, others argue that
still
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handwriting skills are very important. In my way of thinking,
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hand writing
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skill is an art even though not used as much
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like technologies used.
Firstly
, By using
technology
, paper production can be reduced massively. Even though, authentic way of handwriting skill is an art, not used in many
places
. If a person had made mistake while typing, can be modified easily whereas it is impossible with paper.
However
, resizing the text, colouring the text, highlighting the text, etc can be easily done on computers.
In contrast
, it is a time consumable process while handwriting and need more pieces of equipment to achieve it. In fact, papers cannot be preserved for a lifetime but it is possible with
technology
.
For instance
, we can preserve any file for a lifetime and can be stored in many
places
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, backup, etc. The
second
main reason why
technology
is used in many
places
is
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sharing
files
nowadays
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is a piece of cake. Due to significant growth in
technology
, if a person is not interested in typing, he can simply dictate to the computer and the computer will take care of everything.
Moreover
, the ink used in handwritten papers will vanish after some days.
In addition
, duplicating the
files
is easier in
places
like question paper printing,
books
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printing, etc. In my opinion, due to the advancement in
technology
, it is easier to share
files
, duplicate
files
, preserve
files
, etc so handwriting skill is no longer needed .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obsolete
  • communication
  • digital devices
  • smartphones
  • tablets
  • decrease
  • traditional handwriting skills
  • cognitive development
  • fine motor skills
  • memory retention
  • brain function
  • personal identity
  • cultural history
  • handwritten notes
  • digital communication
  • productivity
  • workplaces
  • touch typing
  • electronic health records
  • legible handwriting
  • educational benefits
  • psychological benefits
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