In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computer, the internet and smartphone, more and more people are to starting to work from home. What are the advantage and disadvantages of this development.

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modern era, there is a growing trend that
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, the notion of
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telecommuting with the expansion of
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and electronic gadgets and those shall be explained in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, of the many advantages, the main merit of
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growth is the economic benefit obtained by institutions. To clarify, the
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companies
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acquired a good amount of money as profit because of the reduction in the expense. If the
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are in office, the institution is responsible
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electricity, water, food and all the requirements.
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, they need to provide a desktop only.
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, if the workers are in their
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them the comfort of their own space and it may aid to improve their working
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capacity
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capacity
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productivity
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productivity
and skills.
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, a study conducted by
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students in Kerala in 2022 depicted that, 55% of employees performed well during their
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time than going to the office environment.
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, though there are merits, there are some drawbacks
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development. Of the many, the main demerit is the
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. To elaborate, if an employee is in his/her
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, there is a chance to
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compel
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after their scheduled time and it may
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not only the mental situations but
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the health situations of that person.
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depends on the internet access and climate conditions in that area and if the worker's
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is in a remote area, it will drastically affect the smooth running of that particular project.
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, there are many individuals who are struggling to get
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internet connection in
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. To conclude, understanding the merits of using new inventions to
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from
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home
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as the economic benefit of that company and the demerit
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as the extra
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done by each
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, it is hopeful that people will assess and select their working environment wisely in the days to come.
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