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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Population in a few countries are trying to indulge themselves in knowing the
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 of the houses that they live in or the cultural heritage of their king or queen’s mansion. I agree with the given statement that more
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 are interested in knowing about the
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 of the periodical constructions, which are either made for them or for rulers of that kingdom. The main reason behind
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 sudden surge of
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 sort of cultural swift is because of
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 are started to know about the places that they live in, either through the free time that they had or through discussions with friends. Due to the pandemic, whatever the root cause,
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 are researching it online or offline. On the one hand, it is a lot easier for them to know about the
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 that they live, because it was either their own
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 are constructed anywhere between 50-100 years out some of which date back to more than that, but we can ask our grandparents who were living now about the
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 of the building, how it was constructed, who made it, old
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 are more interested in telling the story while having lunch or
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dinner.
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, when it comes to larger
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 of the kings in a particular area,
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 like to know through online research and if possible, have a visit themselves like a vocation.
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; more
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 are visiting the British palace, some say that it generates around 500 million pounds in revenue just by visits alone. If you take that into consideration
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 we can see the scale of which
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 are inkling towards
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 particular culture. In conclusion,
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 are knowing about
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 and their
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 in a few countries, either through online or offline research, mainly because of the pandemic which makes
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 curious about knowing about life and the
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 of what they had in life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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