Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A number of
people
say that the noise
amount created by people
ought to be controlled considering others
believe the noise
amount created by people
should be based on people
's desires. In my opinion, people
should be free to make noise
as they wished for human rights but the disturbance which is the result of the extreme noise
against human rights as well.
First
of all, some people
have problems with creating borders to not disturb others
and as a result
, some of them make extreme noises at inappropriate times and make others
uncomfortable. People
who get disturbed by others
over controlled noise
are human beings as well as the creators and they have the right to spend their time in peace. A party which continues until late at night creates big problems for next
door houses such
as sleeping or resting problems for the people
who live in that houses. For example
.
On the other hand
, suppression and control of noise
as life is basic in the public against to sense of freedom which is fundamental for a free society. The noise
as a disturbing cause can be a preventable reason for others
. People
who start the create extreme sounds can realize and keep them down without any strict proportion in my opinion. Feeling free and being free stand on the senses of empathy and respect and the sense of freedom is the most compelling argument to be defended. There is no doubt to agree with others
who say that people
should be free to make as much sound as they desire. For example
.
To summarize, human rights are the primary point of argument but people
should not cross others
' bonds with extreme acts such
as creating noise
enough to disturb others
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