The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graphs illustrate the alterations in ownership of washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners and the number of hours spent doing house chores in Households in a specific nation from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the highest percentage accounted for refrigerators and vacuum cleaners
while
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the washing machine was the least preferred one.
Whereas
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, the number of hours per week indulging in house Works had dropped with every passing
year
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. With regard to refrigerators, it is readily apparent that the ownership had increased from the least to the most common over the period. Following the same trend vacuum cleaner
also
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steadily inclined from 30% to 4000%
at the end
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of 2019. But, washing machine on other hand, showed a gradual increase to 30% in total from the
year
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1920 to 1960,
then
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slowed down by around 8% in the
year
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1980, from
then
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reached up to 75% in the
year
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2019.
Secondly
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, washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning Work in accordance with per hours a week had rapidly decreased from 50% to 20% in 40 years of intervals,
then
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the amount of time spent on doing those things stayed almost the same around 10% to 20% on hold
at the end
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of the
year
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2019.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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