Some people believe the benefit of tourism outweigh the problems it creates in a particular place. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Tourism

is a dynamic and flourishing industry in the modern world. Proponents claim that the advantages exceed

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disadvantages. I entirely agree with

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statement and will attempt to explain both sides in the following paragraphs. The

first

and most important impact of

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tourism

is on the

economic

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. It helps the growth of local small businesses and creates more

jobs

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opportunities

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during high seasons.

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, imagine a remote island

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a popular destination for

tourist

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population.

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faraway island due to provide

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of these people

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to give satisfied services

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has to set up more and more companies and businesses to meet the high level of requirement which needs a large number of workers.

Moreover

,

tourism

allows visitors to experience and live in the culture of the country which might lead to

attract

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investors to finance in some parts.

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carpet weaving is considered as its culture. If foreign companies find it financially beneficial to them, may invest in

this

area and by doing

this

the culture of carpet weaving will become recognised worldwide by the name of Iran beside it.

On the other hand

, there are some adverse effects on

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society.

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of living and housing is one thing that can increase

as a result

of

tourism

which

make

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difficulties for

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population. As

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example, consider some

touristic

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cities namely London and Paris

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where the living cost is soaring day to day. Another negative point

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be named is environmental damage. Take, heritage sites, as an example, that may be exposed to

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severe damage by the crowd of people regularly visiting those locations. Some

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not know the value of

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historical places.

Therefore

, they throw away

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all around and sometimes crave

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sharp tools on

these valuable stuff

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. To sum up, some are of the opinion that

tourism

has a significant impact on a community economically and culturally

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the pros surpass the cons. As I

discusses

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on

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above, I completely agree with the bright side of

tourism

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industry.