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Many people use written language in a less formal and more relaxed way. Why? Does this development have advantages and disadvantages?

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Nowadays, with the advent of progress and the increasing pace of life,
people
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 tend to simplify their everyday communication and
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, in turn, is
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 reflected in the written
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. The shift from
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formal to
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informal written
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 is caused by its lightness as opposed to the traditional writing style.
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,
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 process has both benefits and drawbacks. Let's speculate on
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 topic. On the one hand, a facilitated version of written
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 allows
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 to understand each other better.
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 means that communication becomes easier, and
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 who are involved in the conversation remain at ease throughout
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 because they do not encounter complex
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 constructions and words that require specific knowledge and understanding in writing.
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, informal written style communication can accelerate the work process that requires written interaction between employees because workers quickly understand what is required of them.
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, stress levels are reduced and the workflow is uncomplicated.
On the other hand
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, ease of
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 in writing leads to a general degradation of the
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 culture of the population due to the fact that
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 resort to various abbreviations, loanwords and slang expressions.
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,
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 of writing "as soon as possible"
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 write ''ASAP'' because it is shorter.
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,
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 has an impact not only on written
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 but
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 on spoken
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,
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 sort of
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 in the workplace involves a violation of
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subordination, as relaxed
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 can make a person forget to whom he or she is writing or use something informal in correspondence with a partner and ultimately lose them due to a lack of professionalism. In conclusion,
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 there are a number of downsides and upsides to using a relaxed style in written
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 these days, you need to make sure it is appropriate before using it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • informality
  • digital communication
  • texting
  • social media
  • instant messaging
  • generational shifts
  • brevity
  • personal expression
  • language standards
  • erosion
  • interlocutors
  • emojis
  • internet slang
  • academic contexts
  • language learning
  • misunderstandings
  • language teaching
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