The roads in major cities today are often difficult to travel on. What are the causes of this? What are some possible solutions?

In
this
day and age, travelling on metropolitan
roads
has become a matter of great concern.
This
is mainly due to the lack of proper infrastructure, but it can be controlled by constructing
roads
with the use of appropriate materials. Amongst the major factors, degrading infrastructure of
roads
is perhaps the most contributing significant element.
This
is because,
roads
have many loopholes, and rainwater collected in
this
causes travelling issues
such
as blockage, and companies who build
roads
use the least quality of materials which increases the chances of breakage of
roads
. In India, Punjab, to exemplify, 80% of
roads
have the worsted condition.
Moreover
, overpopulation is another reason.
That is
to say, people are more likely to commute from one place to another by using their own private vehicles,
therefore
, everywhere is loads of traffic congestion on
roads
. Turning to solutions, higher authorities ought to provide an excellent public transport facility to people so they travel pleasantly without any trouble along with decreasing the fares. By doing
this
, traffic will be controlled to some extent. Not only
this
, Companies must build the
roads
by using
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high quality
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materials and reconstruct the
roads
where breakage happens.
Also
, citizens should travel by using public transport
instead
of their own vehicles. It
also
assists to make
traveling
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easier and
effective
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. In conclusion,
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the fact that it is quite difficult to travel on
roads
in cities these days is a major concern we are facing today, if appropriate actions are taken by the government and individuals, it can be controlled to a greater extent.
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